July 25

Sentence Fluency

I went to the park and played on the swings. After, I jumped on the trampoline and played with the other kids and got really dirty, so I went home to change.

Exercise is good for you and gives you energy. Exercise is way to work off stress and can make your body stronger. Also, everyone should exercise.

May 11

Its cruel to keep animals in cages!!

I strongly believe that its cruel to keep animals in cages because they’ll have nowhere to walk around, and they’ll get stuck in dirty cages and its not safe for them.

My first reason is that they’ll have nowhere to go. And the cages have no air to breathe in if their in tiny cages and its also very very useless.

My second reason is the cages can get very dirty and all the animals can get dirty as well. Also animals are sensitive and not like staying in cages very much.

My third reason is that its not that healthy for animals to always get kept in a tiny cage and not walk around.

That’s why its bad and cruel to keep birds in cages.